Various copyedits to reduce future tense, wordiness, and use of 'please' (#5788)

* Reword lots of instances of 'will'

* Reword lots of instances of won't

* Reword lots of instances of we'll

* Eradicate you'll

* Eradicate 'be able to' type of phrases

* Eradicate 'unable to' type of phrases

* Eradicate 'has / have to' type of phrases

* Eradicate 'note that' type of phrases

* Eradicate 'in order to' type of phrases

* Redirect to official Chef and Puppet docs

* Eradicate gratuitous 'please'

* Reduce use of e.g.

* Reduce use of i.e.

* Reduce use of N.B.

* Get rid of 'sexagesimal' and correct some errors
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@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ We also implement push restriction (to a limited user group) for the sake of the
While this model gives you the ability to use whatever authentication backend you want through the secondary authentication mechanism implemented inside your proxy, it also requires that you move TLS termination from the Registry to the proxy itself.
Furthermore, introducing an extra http layer in your communication pipeline will make it more complex to deploy, maintain, and debug, and will possibly create issues.
Furthermore, introducing an extra http layer in your communication pipeline adds complexity when deploying, maintaining, and debugging.
## Setting things up
@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ Run the following script:
mkdir -p auth
mkdir -p data
# This is the main apache configuration you will use
# This is the main apache configuration
cat <<EOF > auth/httpd.conf
LoadModule headers_module modules/mod_headers.so